tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post5439206687668688545..comments2023-10-17T17:08:31.916+01:00Comments on CATE GARDNER: Fixing the Daft DraftCate Gardnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05634397106201021055noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-24868618419802593462009-01-16T14:22:00.000+00:002009-01-16T14:22:00.000+00:00The magic lake could appear and disappear then rea...The magic lake could appear and disappear then reappear again throughout the story. ;)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10442346154131507824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-74060556485220345882009-01-16T13:33:00.000+00:002009-01-16T13:33:00.000+00:00I appears right before the giant slug beast comes ...I appears right before the giant slug beast comes out of the water and eats him. The end.Jamie Eyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05875759697016701358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-39160349633356985532009-01-16T13:31:00.000+00:002009-01-16T13:31:00.000+00:00You could make the suddenly appearing lake a featu...You could make the suddenly appearing lake a feature, not a bug. Maybe he's the only one who can see it and the others are like, "What lake?"K.C. Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467201304235217944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-74114981359602552009-01-16T12:49:00.000+00:002009-01-16T12:49:00.000+00:00My NaNo project is also being revamped. Also...th...My NaNo project is also being revamped. Also...there are worse things to be pulling out of your boots...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-29544002575823426102009-01-16T05:44:00.000+00:002009-01-16T05:44:00.000+00:00LOL! Natalie.Hi Danielle, good to meet another blo...LOL! Natalie.<BR/><BR/>Hi Danielle, good to meet another blogger.<BR/><BR/>LOL! Ian.<BR/><BR/>Brenda, as I get further into the draft I think I'll need a translator as well.<BR/><BR/>WOW! Nice first line Jeremy.Cate Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05634397106201021055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-48195391708424581442009-01-16T04:07:00.000+00:002009-01-16T04:07:00.000+00:00Boy, that'd be a scary opening line."George never ...Boy, that'd be a scary opening line.<BR/><BR/>"George never tired of the satisfying THK sound that baby teeth made as he pulled them out of the sole of his boot."Jeremy D Brookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16014827537536982326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-72171090935578508452009-01-16T03:27:00.000+00:002009-01-16T03:27:00.000+00:00Those darn lakes...they've showed up in the middle...Those darn lakes...they've showed up in the middle of nowhere in my stories also...only my poor characters fell in...along with the plot...grin...<BR/><BR/>I'm waiting on the translator to get back with me...I needed one to tell me what the heck my NaNo was all about... ;)Brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11938209711584620272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-65914638276896544232009-01-16T00:03:00.000+00:002009-01-16T00:03:00.000+00:00Haha! Reminds of a script I wrote years ago, where...Haha! Reminds of a script I wrote years ago, where a character was blown to bits on page 50 and reappeared on page 60. I do like the magical lake idea, though…Tuonelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03204662879792041735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-62270334945163001092009-01-15T22:46:00.000+00:002009-01-15T22:46:00.000+00:00Hi there, have stumbled upon your blog and have be...Hi there, have stumbled upon your blog and have been having a read through. <BR/><BR/>I didn't do NaNoWriMo last year, although am definitely planning to do it this year. However, I do know the somewhat helpless/frustrating/daunting/terrifying feeling of editing a manuscript that has been written in a holy hurry, so can sympathise with you as I'm currently working my way through mine now.<BR/><BR/>I think your blog is great too by the way :) I'm having BlogEnvy.Danielle Birchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796467053451208102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-28719625562823944652009-01-15T20:13:00.000+00:002009-01-15T20:13:00.000+00:00These things happen. If I had a nickle for every t...These things happen. If I had a nickle for every time I woke up in a lake, I'd be a rich woman!Fox Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05487359877190292039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-83070084996370910052009-01-15T19:08:00.000+00:002009-01-15T19:08:00.000+00:00Oh it's far from magical. It's a very nasty lake.Oh it's far from magical. It's a very nasty lake.Cate Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05634397106201021055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-51119373143557961772009-01-15T18:46:00.000+00:002009-01-15T18:46:00.000+00:00Maybe it is a magical lake or perhaps a mirage?Maybe it is a magical lake or perhaps a mirage?Jamie Eyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05875759697016701358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-31824161207617600302009-01-15T18:26:00.000+00:002009-01-15T18:26:00.000+00:00Thanks, Aaron.Thanks, Aaron.Cate Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05634397106201021055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-16680849420779543292009-01-15T18:21:00.000+00:002009-01-15T18:21:00.000+00:00"*No babies were harmed in the making of this draf..."*No babies were harmed in the making of this draft, their teeth fell out due to natural causes."<BR/><BR/>Were they replaced by zippers? (yes, I've finally finished re-reading The Posioned Apple and should have some comments soon.)<BR/><BR/>I'm avoiding my nano draft.Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-34293079518141096192009-01-15T18:18:00.000+00:002009-01-15T18:18:00.000+00:00I'm sure I have plenty more to come this draft.I'm sure I have plenty more to come this draft.Cate Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05634397106201021055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1040257926855761879.post-40244847265313835312009-01-15T18:11:00.000+00:002009-01-15T18:11:00.000+00:00Oh man, that sounds familiar, and I'm not even tal...Oh man, that sounds familiar, and I'm not even talking about Nano drafts! I wonder what hilarious bloopers will await me when I crack open mine.Kateyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05727622678452936037noreply@blogger.com